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[Rewrite] Leia Organa (Lothal)

 
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 01, 2019 7:57 pm    Post subject: [Rewrite] Leia Organa (Lothal) Reply with quote

This was a very recent standard, so basically all I did was reformat it into bullets, add photos, and reword things to get rid of a few "should"s.

Quote:
Standard Name: Leia Organa (Lothal)
Primary Detachment: Rebel Legion Galactic Senate
Submission Date: December 1, 2019
Existing Standard URL: http://newsite.rebellegion.com/leia-organa-lothal/

Front Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
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Back / Second View Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

Character Description
Princess Leia Organa was one of the Rebel Alliance’s greatest leaders, fearless on the battlefield and dedicated to ending the tyranny of the Empire. Daughter of Padmι Amidala and Anakin Skywalker, sister of Luke Skywalker, and with a soft spot for scoundrels, Leia ranks among the galaxy’s great heroes. But life under the New Republic has not been easy for Leia. Sidelined by a new generation of political leaders, she struck out on her own to oppose the First Order as founder of the Resistance. These setbacks in her political career have been accompanied by more personal losses. (Source: Star Wars Databank)

Required Items

Shirt

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Fitted matte cream or off-white colored shirt with scoop neck and wrist-length sleeves.
• The shirt has a center back seam.
• Shirt has steel gray, wide edging around the collar, which forms a V-shape at the center front under the collar and connects in a vertical line to wide gray edging around the waist.
• Four small medium gray or silver rectangles decorate the edge of the collar; two on the front and two on the back.
• A small medium gray or silver chest box is mounted on the center-front of the shirt, just below the collar. The raised box is slightly narrower at the top than the bottom. The box has three vertical black lines or grooves on the lower left corner and a medium gray circle or button on the lower right corner. There is a horizontal line or grove across the bottom of the box.
• Below the box, lying flat on the shirt is a small medium gray or silver trapezoid with a medium gray circle or button in the center.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_and_the_Ghost_crew.png
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URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01075.jpeg
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URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

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URL:
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Pants

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Steel gray, matte, tight fitting pants or leggings.
• Pants match the gray portions of the shirt.
• The shirt lays flat over the top of the pants and is not tucked into the pants.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/vlcsnap-01356.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

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Boots

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Cream or off-white, matte (non-shiny) leather leather-like mid-calf boots
• Boots have a white triangle decoration on the toes.
• Boots have a low heel (1/4″ to 1 1/2″ / .5 cm to 4 cm recommended).
• Boots do not have buckles, straps, or laces.
Optional Details
• Boots may have zippers if on the inside of the legs.
• Boots have a heel cap.

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/vlcsnap-01356.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

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Belt

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Costumer wears a thin, cream belt around the hips made of matte (non-shiny) leather or leather-like material.
• The belt has two wider strips on top of the main belt on the side of the hips.
• There is a silver pentagon buckle in the center front with a flat circle or button in the center.
• There is a black and gray/silver droid caller mounted on the left hip.
• There is a small silver box mounted on the right hip.
• Belt does not have any visible closures.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00988.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

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Hair

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00247.jpeg
Source:

Required Details
• Hair is pulled back into a large, low bun that is separated into three parts horizontally at the base of the neck.
• At the top of the bun is a silver hour-glass shaped hair clip decorated with the Alderaan symbol.
• A braid loops up from the bun around the back of the head.
• No fringe or bangs.
• Naturally occurring hair colors only (brown hair color recommended).
Optional Details
• If a wig or hair extensions are used, they should be of high quality and appear like hair.

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/maxresdefault-2.jpg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00235.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/12552674_10103665720917724_1147109473098617495_n.jpg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01190.jpeg
Source

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source:

Costume Resources:
• Reference Photo Gallery – http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/princess-leia-organa-rebels-lothal/
• Member Build Threads – http://www.forum.rebellegion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=1028535#1028535

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 02, 2019 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There are just some grammar things that could be addressed. Would you like me to make those suggestions? Just a few placements of commas & maybe some removal of "There is a . . . " to just a flat statement (within some of the "required details" segments).
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 03, 2019 7:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, please do. Smile We would rather avoid to have bad grammar in the final version.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 30, 2019 7:14 pm    Post subject: Re: [Rewrite] Leia Organa (Lothal) Reply with quote

How does this look, with those grammar tweaks? Otherwise this might be ready to go to the LMO team to be finalized.

Quote:
Standard Name: Leia Organa (Lothal)
Primary Detachment: Rebel Legion Galactic Senate
Submission Date: December 1, 2019
Existing Standard URL: http://newsite.rebellegion.com/leia-organa-lothal/

Front Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Back / Second View Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

Character Description
Princess Leia Organa was one of the Rebel Alliance’s greatest leaders, fearless on the battlefield and dedicated to ending the tyranny of the Empire. Daughter of Padmι Amidala and Anakin Skywalker, sister of Luke Skywalker, and with a soft spot for scoundrels, Leia ranks among the galaxy’s great heroes. But life under the New Republic has not been easy for Leia. Sidelined by a new generation of political leaders, she struck out on her own to oppose the First Order as founder of the Resistance. These setbacks in her political career have been accompanied by more personal losses. (Source: Star Wars Databank)

Required Items

Shirt

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Fitted matte cream or off-white colored shirt with scoop neck and wrist-length sleeves.
• Shirt has a center back seam.
• Shirt has steel gray, wide edging around the collar, which forms a V-shape at the center front under the collar and connects in a vertical line to wide gray edging around the waist.
• Four small medium gray or silver rectangles decorate the edge of the collar; two on the front and two on the back.
• A small medium gray or silver chest box is mounted on the center-front of the shirt, just below the collar. The raised box is slightly narrower at the top than the bottom. The box has three vertical black lines or grooves on the lower left corner and a medium gray circle or button on the lower right corner. There is a horizontal line or grove across the bottom of the box.
• Below the box, lying flat on the shirt is a small medium gray or silver trapezoid with a medium gray circle or button in the center.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_and_the_Ghost_crew.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01075.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Pants

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Steel gray, matte, tight-fitting pants or leggings.
• Pants match the gray portions of the shirt.
• The shirt lays flat over the top of the pants and is not tucked into the pants.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/vlcsnap-01356.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Boots

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Cream or off-white matte (non-shiny) leather leather-like mid-calf boots
• Boots have a white triangle decoration on the toes.
• Boots have a low heel (1/4″ to 1 1/2″ / .5 cm to 4 cm recommended).
• Boots do not have buckles, straps, or laces.
Optional Details
• Boots may have zippers if on the inside of the legs.
• Boots have a heel cap.

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/vlcsnap-01356.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Belt

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Thin, cream belt is worn around the hips made of matte (non-shiny) leather or leather-like material.
• The belt has two wider strips on top of the main belt on the side of the hips.
• Silver pentagon buckle in the center front with a flat circle or button in the center.
• Black and gray/silver droid caller mounted on the left hip.
• Small silver box mounted on the right hip.
• Belt does not have any visible closures.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00988.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Hair

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00247.jpeg
Source:

Required Details
• Hair is pulled back into a large, low bun that is separated into three parts horizontally at the base of the neck.
• At the top of the bun is a silver hour-glass shaped hair clip decorated with the Alderaan symbol.
• A braid loops up from the bun around the back of the head.
• No fringe or bangs.
• Naturally occurring hair colors only (brown hair color recommended).
Optional Details
• If a wig or hair extensions are used, they should be of high quality and appear like hair.

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/maxresdefault-2.jpg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00235.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/12552674_10103665720917724_1147109473098617495_n.jpg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01190.jpeg
Source

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source:

Costume Resources:
• Reference Photo Gallery – http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/princess-leia-organa-rebels-lothal/
• Member Build Threads – http://www.forum.rebellegion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=1028535#1028535

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 17, 2020 10:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good. Smile

Only spotted a missing word in this sentence: (Under boots)
Cream or off-white matte (non-shiny) leather leather-like mid-calf boots

Changed to:
Cream or off-white matte (non-shiny) leather or leather-like mid-calf boots


Otherwise it looks ready to move on.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 08, 2020 9:30 pm    Post subject: Re: [Rewrite] Leia Organa (Lothal) Reply with quote

In that case, with those tweaks, this is ready to move to the LMO team for review.

Quote:
Standard Name: Leia Organa (Lothal)
Primary Detachment: Rebel Legion Galactic Senate
Submission Date: December 1, 2019
Existing Standard URL: http://newsite.rebellegion.com/leia-organa-lothal/

Front Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Back / Second View Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

Character Description
Princess Leia Organa was one of the Rebel Alliance’s greatest leaders, fearless on the battlefield and dedicated to ending the tyranny of the Empire. Daughter of Padmι Amidala and Anakin Skywalker, sister of Luke Skywalker, and with a soft spot for scoundrels, Leia ranks among the galaxy’s great heroes. But life under the New Republic has not been easy for Leia. Sidelined by a new generation of political leaders, she struck out on her own to oppose the First Order as founder of the Resistance. These setbacks in her political career have been accompanied by more personal losses. (Source: Star Wars Databank)

Required Items

Shirt

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Fitted matte cream or off-white colored shirt with scoop neck and wrist-length sleeves.
• Shirt has a center back seam.
• Shirt has steel gray, wide edging around the collar, which forms a V-shape at the center front under the collar and connects in a vertical line to wide gray edging around the waist.
• Four small medium gray or silver rectangles decorate the edge of the collar; two on the front and two on the back.
• A small medium gray or silver chest box is mounted on the center-front of the shirt, just below the collar. The raised box is slightly narrower at the top than the bottom. The box has three vertical black lines or grooves on the lower left corner and a medium gray circle or button on the lower right corner. There is a horizontal line or grove across the bottom of the box.
• Below the box, lying flat on the shirt is a small medium gray or silver trapezoid with a medium gray circle or button in the center.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_and_the_Ghost_crew.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01075.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Pants

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Steel gray, matte, tight-fitting pants or leggings.
• Pants match the gray portions of the shirt.
• The shirt lays flat over the top of the pants and is not tucked into the pants.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/vlcsnap-01356.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Boots

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Cream or off-white matte (non-shiny) leather or leather-like mid-calf boots
• Boots have a white triangle decoration on the toes.
• Boots have a low heel (1/4″ to 1 1/2″ / .5 cm to 4 cm recommended).
• Boots do not have buckles, straps, or laces.
Optional Details
• Boots may have zippers if on the inside of the legs.
• Boots have a heel cap.

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/vlcsnap-01356.png
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/StarWarsRebelsLeia610.jpg
Source:

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Belt

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/Leia_Rebels.jpg
Source:

Required Details
• Thin, cream belt is worn around the hips made of matte (non-shiny) leather or leather-like material.
• The belt has two wider strips on top of the main belt on the side of the hips.
• Silver pentagon buckle in the center front with a flat circle or button in the center.
• Black and gray/silver droid caller mounted on the left hip.
• Small silver box mounted on the right hip.
• Belt does not have any visible closures.

Optional Details
•

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00988.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source

URL:
Source:

URL:
Source:

Hair

Item Image
URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00247.jpeg
Source:

Required Details
• Hair is pulled back into a large, low bun that is separated into three parts horizontally at the base of the neck.
• At the top of the bun is a silver hour-glass shaped hair clip decorated with the Alderaan symbol.
• A braid loops up from the bun around the back of the head.
• No fringe or bangs.
• Naturally occurring hair colors only (brown hair color recommended).
Optional Details
• If a wig or hair extensions are used, they should be of high quality and appear like hair.

Additional Images

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/maxresdefault-2.jpg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_00235.jpeg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/12552674_10103665720917724_1147109473098617495_n.jpg
Source:

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01190.jpeg
Source

URL: http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/swrebels210_01176.jpeg
Source:

URL:
Source:

Costume Resources:
• Reference Photo Gallery – http://www.senate.rebellegion.com/princess-leia-organa-rebels-lothal/
• Member Build Threads – http://www.forum.rebellegion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=1028535#1028535

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