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Kylo Ren (Dawn Bright) Assistant Membership Officer


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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:29 pm Post subject: WIP: Mustafar Padme
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Ok so the dress is called "Sleeveless" in movie terms, but shes choked out Padme on Mustafar to me
..I know there is still good in him
THIS IS NOT MINE. BUT I NEED REFERENCE
Look good to everyone?
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Kylo Ren (Dawn Bright) Assistant Membership Officer


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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:25 am Post subject:
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I don't have anyone here to tell me how much I messed up on this costume so ill welcme any critique.
My main concerns
The jewel piece:
Is it close enough? WOW there is so much detail
Is the gold alright?
Should I make it just a hair bigger?
Pants
Are they NOT white enough?
Anyone else anyone else see?
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Kylo Ren (Dawn Bright) Assistant Membership Officer


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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:58 am Post subject:
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 6:50 am Post subject:
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your boots look great!
how many stitches do you have on the leggings _________________
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jedimastermolina (Alan) Detachment XO


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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 7:20 am Post subject:
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Awesome job
But I do believe the jewel needs to be bigger
and the trousers are fitted more like leggings or at least thats what they look to me in the movie
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 1:59 pm Post subject:
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Initial thoughts seeing the side by side:
-Buckle gold piece looks a bit small
-Hangs a bit farther over your shoulder
-Flare/drape on yours looks like it hangs differently and "flips" outward; maybe too much flare, needs to be fitted a tiny bit more?
-Pants should be legging-style and maybe a different shade?
To my eye, boots are taller, but look fine, arm sleeves look great collar looks good, hair looks great.
I've not done this costume, so maybe someone who has could chime in? _________________
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Kylo Ren (Dawn Bright) Assistant Membership Officer


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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:08 pm Post subject:
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You guys rock! *makes those changes*
I see everything you guys are talking about.
I can make the jewel larger. I'll just add a bit more girth behind it!
All the rest I can fix quick!
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:16 pm Post subject:
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Dawn you are rocking that costume!  |
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 8:58 pm Post subject:
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Amidalas wrote: | You guys rock! *makes those changes*
I see everything you guys are talking about.
I can make the jewel larger. I'll just add a bit more girth behind it!
All the rest I can fix quick!
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Kylo Ren (Dawn Bright) Assistant Membership Officer


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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 9:41 pm Post subject:
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WOW Bad photo! So dark x.x Got all the changes but I think that I can bring in the pants even more! XD
*hugs* I couldn't do it without you guys
*edit* Tightening pants more* I like the color now, its so much closer
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THE HELP~!~! _________________
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Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 12:25 pm Post subject:
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Your speed on these costume floors me, Dawn! I agree with all the comments above, and it looks like you're really churning through updates!
The one suggestion I have is to give the tail of your braid a bit of a haircut. Right now it looks like extensions that are all the same length. If you look at natural hair at the end of a braid, it sort of tapers rather than pom-poms. Some shaping trimming could help your braid look more like real hair and less like a hairpiece.
Overall, lovely work! _________________
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 2:52 pm Post subject:
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I love the hair and arm sleeves very well done. And all though the mirror shot wasn't great it seemed that you got the fitting on the shirt straps fitting better.
I think this is coming along really well and looks awesome! Love seeing the progress pictures! _________________ Little Geek loves her Big and Baby Geek! |
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2014 2:04 pm Post subject:
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Looking nice, one thought though, there should be embroidery just on the left sleeve/glove. I got mine accepted just a short time ago...
Nice job
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2014 3:03 pm Post subject:
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*makes new glove*
Haha thank you! Wow how did I miss that x.x
This is why I make these boards. WiPs are so helpful
Jenna: Thank you! I was going to take an iron to the hair! Shes got curly hair and I noticed in the original shes got a nice curl at the end _________________
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2014 3:08 pm Post subject:
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*makes new glove*
Haha thank you!
This is why I make these boards. WiPs are so helpful _________________
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